Blue Rose Romance

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Jesse

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Blue Rose Romance

Lips ignite tonight.
Fire in the eyes.
My heart beats faster,
Yearning for you.

A rose, thorns ungrown,
Its skin o'er your own.
Feelings inside stir.
Feel- rose of blue.

Caress, softly now.
Breathing, heavier.
Love you forever.
All held back let go.

Passion- pure, true.
Love- the only cure.
Connected, we live.
Hearts, fully given.


Longing for you.
Chest beating quicker.
Flame behind the eyes.
Our lips ignite.
 
:D I sure do! :) This is probably the best poem I've ever written.

From the middle to the top and the middle to the bottom- it's supposed to mirror in rhyme and syllables per line.

Like the last line of stanza 1 and 2 have 4 syllables, the first line of 4 and 5 have 4 syllables.

Lines 7 and 8 rhyme with 14 and 13 respectively. The first and last stanza's are mirror images as well.
 

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