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sallekhana

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if i died right now
nobody,
nobody would know.

all i wanted was
a simple stroke.
all i wanted was
a bit of coke.

i feel like i'm sailing but i'm just a kid,
get it together kid!
i dont even know how to sail a boat,
i'm lost completely.

the stars fall
and crash
in my room

tangling up
wrapping me
like cotton sheets.

they are mine!
the stars!
mine!

but they still
seem to keep me
colder than i was before.

if i could just feel
someone's arms
around me right now
as i cry it would do so much.

but who could love
such a sad ugly
drunken boat
tossing and turning
in the waves lost
for eternity.

the drunken boat
forever alone,
a ghost ship;
impossible to find,
impossible to be found.

cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry. cry.

alone.
 
The theme is nice. Very nice.

I think you might've put too many cries in


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