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sallekhana

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the streets are broken
with empty lots,
the bell has spoken
and shattered hearts

keep starring at the sky
wishing it was theirs.

a beauty strolls through the yard
inventing love from where it starts;
its the birth of a tearful departing.

alarms are calling,
you are absent.
alarms are calling,
"amen."

the open arms
of alcohol
and the helping hand
of a sudden fall

have me stripped down
to my bear meaning.

a beauty strolls through the yard
inventing love from where it starts;
its the birth of a tearful departing.

alarms are calling,
you are absent.
alarms are calling,
"amen."
 
I really like the ending to this poem! It has a nice finality to it.

and the helping hand
of a sudden fall

I like that part right there too, beautiful is all I can say. Keep it up!
 
I encourage you to write more and share with us man. I liked it.
 

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