Poem: You and me

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Ladysphinx

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Here I am my friend
I'm dark, very dark
My claws are black and sharp
My theeth and jaw are powerful

I'm in your head, in your mind
I'm there for you, till you DIE
Look in the mirror, look see
It's me staring back at you

I dare you to take me out, just try
Try and destroy me, let's see who'll win
I AM your master
I AM your GOD

Without me your nothing
With me your nothing too
You should be free, should be happy
But instead your here with me

Slowly I eat away your soul
I claw my way through your heart
Feel the pain I create, feel it
Feel the gaping hole inside of you

Your mine and I LOVE you
I LOVE you and always will do
With ME we can reach new depts
Just wait and see, you and ME

I'm sorry for this dark poem. I couldn't sleep and this is what came out of my pen.
 
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is very good. Do you mind sharing with me what inspired you to write it? I would really like to know the story (if there is one) behind your work!
 
AHHHHH

*jumps up and down with macabre glee*

:D

that's freakin awesome I love dark poetry,

that's just the right kind,

it's brilliant,
it taste like blood if blood tasted like licorice

:p
 
I sometimes go in stages of very bad depression somtimes it lasts only a few day sometimes weeks. My doctor calls a seonal depression and says it's harder to treat then normal depression cause it comes and goes. It's not bipolar either. I use poetry to to help me describe whats going on in my head this is what I felt like at that time. It's this monster inside me that is feeding on my misery and tries to convince me that I need it. It's hard to explain. I basicly allowed the depression to write the poem. I have a part 2 of this poem. Hubby says I'm two different ppl. And the one with depression scarce the crap out of him cause I have told him how bad it gets, just in case I loose the battle. I don't really want ppl to know when I'm depressed
 

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