Some Poem I Just Typed

[Volmornu]

Looking through your eyes
Disliking what I see
Trying to correct the vision
You're not listening to me
Mold you to make you fit in me
Defiant you are at every turn
My enemy, my only friend
Myself, as far as I'm concerned
Now you are gone
But your eyes and voice remain
I still cannot let you win
With you gone, everything is still the same

 

[Minty]

I imagined a feeling of frustration when I read that. Maybe I am wrong. I like it though.

 

[DVEUS]

nice poem...

i interpret it as you want someone to change yet change will never come therefore the situation remains status quo...???