Dying for a Taste

[Rayri]

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Touch the cold glass of the window pane
Hearing the calling from outside
It calls my name
Despair, i get it
Unable,
So unable
To do anything
To turn away
To comprehend a word from the mouth of it
The clash of silver with the dead man
A war against its other
A dream of better things
Makes it all go away
To pretend it's all just floating
Gone, gone, gone
In it's own dark bubble
It runs down the trembling mountain
Upon the back of a horse
And leaves a river of red wine
The taste of it pleases me
Sip after sip
For i could bear the refreshing drink one last time
Drunk from such a horrid way
Queasy from disgust
Everywhere, it flows
All over the floor
Such a place to spill wine
Its taste so sweet
Sweet acrid wine

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Well it didnt align it for me XD
But i did my best.
Sorry if its not so great

 

[Rayri]

Guess no one likes it...
Maybe ill ask Mints to delete it.

 

[Sci-Fi]

You just posted, give it a bit.

I'm not very objective when it comes to poetry, I tend to like most stuff unless it makes no sense to me. Yours does, I like it.

You're aligning didn't work because you have it ending before it started. align=center should be first, then /align at the end of your text with the [ ] around them.

 

[Rayri]

Ooh okay thank you.