I Won't Let You Drown!

[Dark_Poet]

The forest grins as the night swallows the day
You walk with me when I need it most
The fog creeps in and devours the ground

I see your body begin to slip
Your expression changes as the ground begins to swallow
Don't worry
I won't let you drown

The night becomes even more hellish as the battle rages on
From one friend to another
We'll make it through the dawn

I wrestle valiantly without fail
Even though I'm so weak and frail

I manage to pull you out
Tears fall from my eyes
I hug you without hesitation
Relieved to save you from this devastation
I won't let you drown I shout
I'd save you in a heartbeat
There's no doubt

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[Nolife Princess]

The forest grins as the night swallows the day
You walk with me when I need it most
The fog creeps in and devours the ground

I see your body begin to slip
Your expression changes as the ground begins to swallow
Don't worry
I won't let you drown

The night becomes even more hellish as the battle rages on
From one friend to another
We'll make it through the dawn

I wrestle valiantly without fail
Even though I'm so weak and frail

I manage to pull out out
Tears fall from my eyes
I hug you without hesitation
Relieved to save you from this devastation
I won't let you drown I shout
I'd save you in a heartbeat
There's no doubt

​

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This is lovely.... if you said this to me, I would go weak at the knees.
*hugs*
xoxo

 

[Mouse]

Beautiful poem, so expressively written.

You have already walked with me, and I am so blessed.

 

[whispers]

Beautifull, brought tears to my eyes. Love your art !!

 

[Dark_Poet]

This is lovely.... if you said this to me, I would go weak at the knees.
*hugs*
xoxo

Thank you!

That was very sweet of you to say!

Beautiful poem, so expressively written.

You have already walked with me, and I am so blessed.

Thank you Mouse!

That was very kind of you

Beautifull, brought tears to my eyes. Love your art !!

Thank you so much!

That means a lot!

 

[MadMonkè]

you have really good quality work

 

[Astral_Punisher]

Wow, Dark, you have some serious talent.
I work in a writing group in my area - we read and critique poetry often.
I think you've got great imagery, and I enjoyed the rhythm and pace.

Keep it up!
YOU ARE EPIC.