Older works

[Haven]

I've posted a few poems on the forum so far this is just a bored persons hobby. I cant remember what I added and didn't add from my older work so I'm going to post some on this thread. I show these to few people and I'm hoping to get either positive or negative opinions on my work. I'm debating on submitting it to a competition.

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This clear glass wall I just cant break
or penetrate. To Get to you.
I just cant get through.
Is this glass wall fear?

And what would you do if I broke through
and made it to you.
Would you have me stay.
Or would you push me away
and have me walk bare foot
on the path of broken glass.
Made from the wall of fear.

And now I wash the blood from my feet with tears.
I hope this pain disappears.
And I pray to stop feeling despair.
But why should you care.

You are the one that pushed me on my rear.
And told me despair.
and not to come near.

You watched as I walked back.
On the path of broken glass.
I made from fear.
At least help me clean the bloody foot prints of mine you help make.

The next glass wall will be more fortified.
And easy to make.
But It will leave even more glass shards when it breaks.
I pray next time I wont make the same mistake.

 

[Haven]

Where were you my only hope.
To stop me from my overdose.
You are the tune.
I'll hum your notes.
Your the sweetest breeze a breath can hold.
Your a work of art that bares a soul.
Now I lie in a tomb alone.
This prison that I call a home.
I wrote a book you threw away.
your name was written on every page.
Those chapters were my every day.
And you ripped out every page.
You were a song I wouldn't play.
the very word I wouldn't say.
You were a bird, and I your cage.
But when I finally opened up to you.
You flew away.