haiku

[teach]

That's really good, deep.

 

[mimizu]

with an empty mind,
staring at the empty screen,
i can't write haikus

 

[Jeremi]

Sometimes I wonder,
will it ever get better?
Then I drink some tea

 

[Wave Shock]

Calm is the silence
The true feelings are revealed
To show who I am

 

[Lost in the Oilfield]

The lonely vampire
Wanders alone at night.
His life is at stake !

Hah, I like it

Hmm, I haven't done a haiku since high school. Never really understood them cause they're a poem that doesn't rhyme right? I'll try it tho... 5-7-5???

Haven't done haiku
Since when I was in high school
Can you make them rhyme?

I would like to rhyme
With a five syllable line
It would be divine

lol that was lame

I don't do haiku
I wish I were a poet
Maybe then I would

Is the haiku me
Or how I see the haiku
What is reflection

Is the haiku deep
Or is the haiku simple
What is the haiku

 

[husky]

I would like to rhyme
With a five syllable line
It would be divine

lol that was lame

that's the funniest poem i've read since birth

 

[Wave Shock]

The Feeling

The hidden feeling,
I want to experience,
Is deep within me

It is the calm breeze
The one ominous feeling
During the twilight

What is there to say
What is there for me to do
But just sit and wait

No need to worry
Let the open mind wander
Nothing more to do

The feeling inside
Hidden deep from within me
Takes me far away

I wish to keep it
alas, it must lay hidden
Until the next time​

 

[Whoaisme]

Oh dear lord jebus
Why are we writing haikus
I guess I'm bored too.

 

[Lost in the Oilfield]

haha, glad u liked that one Husky
Sorry this one's not funny too
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A press of soft lips
A cheek that beckons caress
My heart desires

 

[Lost in the Oilfield]

The tiger crouches
The gazelle grazes green grass
Hunger satisfied

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Thanks for this thread Husky!
I never would have thought to play with Haiku's otherwise

 

[husky]

thank you for writing such nice haikus. i just love how they seem careless and spontaneous, like butterflies.

 

[Whoaisme]

Careless I think not
Spontaneous maybe so
Yet I like haikus

 

[Jeremi]

Cool, found this old thread
Bump so that you all once again
Can write some haikus

 

[TheLonelySkeptic]

Cool, found this old thread
Bump so that you all once again
Can write some haikus

That would be Haiku,
If only it had one less
Syllable (line two).

 

[Lost in the Oilfield]

This life is wanting

Another year bites the dust

This life is wasting

 

[Matej]

Blowing off the dust,
the thread returns to this world,
have fun everyone!

(btw, haikus are not necessarily 5-7-5, or so I've been taught. Traditionally, yes, but...)

 

[Badjedidude]

Five syllables -- good.

Seven is too much for me.

I shall stick with five.

#5

 

[Depressedology]

what's haiku